2023全国乙卷
第四部分写作(共两节,满分 35 分)
第一节 短文改错(共 10 小题:每小题1 分,满分10 分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
Last Friday my mom decided to color his hair. She studied with all the hair products at the drugstore. The color she choose came in a box which had a picture of a woman that hair color looked just perfect. Mom was sure same color would look great on her. She put the new color on her hair or sat sill for 30 minutes , just as the directions saying ,.However , instead of the brownish red hair she had hoped for, she final got purple hair. She went right in-to the shower to washing it, but it was no use. At least one thing proved truth: the color wouldn t wash out.
答案及解析：
1. his → her
指代错误，应该用女性第三人称单数
2. 删除with
study是及物动词，后面直接接宾语，介词with多余。故删除with。
3. choose → chose
时态错误，应该用过去式
4. that→ whose
关系代词错误，应该用表示所有关系的whose
5. same前面加the
same前常加定冠词。
6. or → and
逻辑关系错误，应该用and表示并列
7. saying → said
动词形式错误，应该用过去分词表示被动
8. final → finally
副词使用错误，应该用finally表示最终
9. washing → wash
动词形式错误，应该用动词原形表示目的
10. truth → true
prove为系动词,表示“证明是”,后接形容词。
