2018年全国卷一
第四部分 写作
第一节 短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的次。
删除:把多余用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:(1).每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
(2).只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
During my last winter holiday I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond, which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.
答案解析:
1.加the countryside特指祖父母所在的农村,前面要加 the。
2. find → found 删除a,因为find是实义动词,这里应该用find的过去式found。
3. another → another 是“三者或三者以上的另一个”,而 other 是“其他的”,因为后面 animals 是可数名词的复数形式,所以应该将 anther 改为 other 。
4. 将here改为there,因为前面提到的是我去的地方,应该用there指代。
5. 将chicken改为chickens,因为chicken在这里是可数名词复数,表示多只鸡。
6. 在which前加in,因为pond是一个地点,需要用介词in。
7. 将sell改为selling,因为by后面应该跟动名词形式。
8. 将happily改为happy,因为这里应该用形容词happy作系动词felt的表语。
9.删除for, every two years 表示每隔两年,该时间状语前不加介词。
10. but 改为 and, 通过原文可知,应该是递进或顺承,不是转折关系。